Audience feedback

So our group was able to receive (a lot) of audience feedback from our class to which we presented to. Majority of the feedback were concerns our group hadn't thought of so it was extremely helpful to analyse and answer them.


- Many of them noted similar concerns but the main theme of questions consisted of:

- The struggles of 'pulling off' army scenes, and how we would attempt to portray our protagonist in the army.

- Whether or not there would be a performance element and if a male would be introduced then.

- What range of shots and angles we will adopt to depict her mental strength, and how it will all link lyrically.

Treatment pitch

So this is the recording of the pitch my group gave. I'm really happy with how they presented it as it explains our concept but without the detail leaving our ideas vague to the rest of the class.

Treatment Pitch

So today is pitch day, unfortunately I will be unable to present with the rest of my group as I am not in class today. However the uploaded Prezi below is the completed pitch.
Hopefully our audience will clearly interpret the ideas being portrayed in the way we want it to be leaving them as enthusiastic as us, however I'm also expecting some constructive criticism to help us  improve.